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[SPOILERS] Current Chapter Discussion


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svines85

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I felt the ending was maybe... missing something. I think that it might have been a little better if it had suggested at some kind of future for all of the students, rather than simply ending 

 

You have to admit though, it really is pretty much what you'd expect from the author given his other works............he really does leave a lot at the endings up to the readers to decide. I personally like that type of endings oftentimes.......but it's a style, yeah, and not everybody likes that style nor are all stories suited to it either. 


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Personally I loved the ending.  I agree that it left me wanting to know more about the student's futures, but having to think on that myself with only the information already provided makes it all the more powerful to me. Loved the bait and switch with the cell in the last chapters.



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Thank you for finishing it! Personally, I found the ending to be perfect, and interesting. This is definitely one of his best.