Artwork Improvisation Suggestions
#1
Posted 17 March 2013 - 03:54 PM
#2
Posted 19 April 2013 - 04:20 AM
I think the artwork is generally fine, it looks better then like 80-90% of the manga artwork I have seen (which granted is a pretty low bar to go by)
It seems like your hand isn't quite as steady as one might hope for drawing some of this stuff, where it seems evident you had to double back and correct. I am not faulting you for it though, much better and straighter then most could do I bet. In short, your artwork seems fine.
Edited by truepurple, 19 April 2013 - 10:06 AM.
#3
Posted 19 April 2013 - 02:02 PM
#4
Posted 20 April 2013 - 01:38 AM
Sharpen your lines. Work on your structural anatomy a bit, especially around the pelvis, the chest and laterals (I would suggest either a classical anatomy for artists book, or one for comic book artists.) You do some poses well, but you have to become more consistent. You have to get a much better feel for how the body moves and bends, as well as some of your proportions. Your shading is decent and your action drawing/emphasis on motion is very good. Also, the storyline seems interesting.
Edited by Obsidian-Blue, 20 April 2013 - 01:38 AM.
#5
Posted 20 April 2013 - 01:52 AM
Sharpen your lines. Work on your structural anatomy a bit, especially around the pelvis, the chest and laterals (I would suggest either a classical anatomy for artists book, or one for comic book artists.) You do some poses well, but you have to become more consistent. You have to get a much better feel for how the body moves and bends, as well as some of your proportions. Your shading is decent and your action drawing/emphasis on motion is very good. Also, the storyline seems interesting.
Thank you, it should improve in fall since im going to RISD (Rhode Island School of Design), they're gonna make me work to death, arting until i got no life force left in me xD
#6
Posted 20 April 2013 - 01:58 AM
#7
Posted 20 April 2013 - 01:59 AM
I thought it all seemed good, art and story........besides, authors and artists get better from working, I'm sure yours will too. Looking forward to more
#8
Posted 20 April 2013 - 02:46 AM
Thanks, that's what i'm thinking as well, the only thing i'm worried about at this point is whether i'll end up dumping this project by the end of the first chapter since that's what i've done with a bunch of other works of mine in the past, due to sheer loss of determination or lack of time
#9
Posted 20 April 2013 - 02:58 AM
Haha!! True, there's only so much time in a day............slow and steady isn't a bad way to do things either though. That helps avoid burn-out too.
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#10
Posted 01 June 2013 - 08:43 PM
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