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[ujrkingdom]

Okay, so I've been getting complaints on the artwork, and I realize that there are problems here and there with it. If anyone comes across this, please list some of the problems that you see and i will do my best to correct it/them in later issues and possibly even redo the previous pages with those problems. Thank you.

[truepurple]

I think the artwork is generally fine, it looks better then like 80-90% of the manga artwork I have seen (which granted is a pretty low bar to go by) 

 

It seems like your hand isn't quite as steady as one might hope for drawing some of this stuff, where it seems evident you had to double back and correct. I am not faulting you for it though, much better and straighter then most could do I bet.  In short, your artwork seems fine.

Edited by truepurple, 19 April 2013 - 10:06 AM.

[ujrkingdom]

Thanks for the review

[Obsidian-Blue]

Sharpen your lines. Work on your structural anatomy a bit, especially around the pelvis, the chest and laterals (I would suggest either a classical anatomy for artists book, or one for comic book artists.) You do some poses well, but you have to become more consistent. You have to get a much better feel for how the body moves and bends, as well as some of your proportions. Your shading is decent and your action drawing/emphasis on motion is very good.  Also, the storyline seems interesting.

 

Edited by Obsidian-Blue, 20 April 2013 - 01:38 AM.

[ujrkingdom]

Sharpen your lines. Work on your structural anatomy a bit, especially around the pelvis, the chest and laterals (I would suggest either a classical anatomy for artists book, or one for comic book artists.) You do some poses well, but you have to become more consistent. You have to get a much better feel for how the body moves and bends, as well as some of your proportions. Your shading is decent and your action drawing/emphasis on motion is very good.  Also, the storyline seems interesting.

 

Thank you, it should improve in fall since im going to RISD (Rhode Island School of Design), they're gonna make me work to death, arting until i got no life force left in me xD

[Obsidian-Blue]

Awesome! I was planning to go to SSAD, but life got in the way

[svines85]

I thought it all seemed good, art and story........besides, authors and artists get better from working, I'm sure yours will too. Looking forward to more

[ujrkingdom]

Thanks, that's what i'm thinking as well, the only thing i'm worried about at this point is whether i'll end up dumping this project by the end of the first chapter since that's what i've done with a bunch of other works of mine in the past, due to sheer loss of determination or lack of time

[svines85]

Haha!! True, there's only so much time in a day............slow and steady isn't a bad way to do things either though. That  helps avoid burn-out too.

[Hehe]

It's improved since the last chapter great job looking forward to more