E? Heibon Desu yo??

Why do people complain about a "slice of life" manga must have great "story-writing" and explain everything, no plot-hole and blah blah blah ?

For god sake, this is a shoujo manga not a fantasy historical manga. 

ALL AUTHOR EVER WANT is cute art and cute story, she make her MC a little over-power and have advance technology only to make MC special, make reader love MC more.

I don't think this is really that story.  The girl really hasn't introduced much of significance technologically--her stuff mostly could almost be called cultural innovations as much as technological.  And she probably simply doesn't know enough to overcome the implementation difficulties of most serious technological advancements. 

The face mask she just constructed is actually very technologically advanced.

In the "old days", the best/closest thing to a face mask were full sized, leather skinned, glass lens helmets that were difficult to breath in, hard to see through and very, VERY hot.

As much as it tries, the story is falling back on the same "reborn in a new world with uberpowers and/or modern technology" tropes as the rest of the genre.

I don't think this is really that story.  The girl really hasn't introduced much of significance technologically--her stuff mostly could almost be called cultural innovations as much as technological.  And she probably simply doesn't know enough to overcome the implementation difficulties of most serious technological advancements. 

I think your point of view is much more correct than mine, however, how they handle in depicting the gravity of the situation is really poor. Take this arc for example, it has through the process of 3-4 chapters, attempting to describe Miasma as a calamity that appears approxamitely every half-decade akin to say an epidemic. However, in describing  the effects of the calamity, what the readers get is a second account sob story of how a friend died in a fire, as a result of miasma.  The story-telling is  just not great and doesn't really allow the reader to be able to empathize with the MC and just leaves the reader with the question.. so what? rather than I wonder what the MC is going to do next chapter?

Maybe Im looking at this the wrong way, but this manga/series wants to show reincarnated MC tackling on top 10 problems (hunger,poverty, disease, social inequality,etc.)   (At least thats what I have deduced so far)

 

Still, all this manga has done has done so far is say in very general terms, Problems are bad, Overpowered MC with modern knowledge is going make some Magical solution and then they lived happily ever after. Author doesn't even try to make the problems seem severe in the first place, taking away the gravity and significance of the story. Wouldn't be very farfetched if somehow magical penicillin fell from the sky.

 

 

Why doesn't the author talk about consequences, difficulty of implementation, limitations, as well as the necessary sacrifices, giving a much richer backstory?

 

By this point I can't tell if its bad translation of the source material, or if it is just generally poor writing, albeit the art is good.

I don't think this is really that story.  The girl really hasn't introduced much of significance technologically--her stuff mostly could almost be called cultural innovations as much as technological.  And she probably simply doesn't know enough to overcome the implementation difficulties of most serious technological advancements. 

I too don't blame her for being scared, but the rest of that comment is pretty damn rancid IMO.  Those of us not currently dying of a disease we know is incurable that we've been brought up to fear and dread can't really be sure just how tough we'd hang in their shoes.  They know they've basically been stuck in that room to die out of everyone's way.  I too would probably ask her to at least give it a try.  Why not?  A chance is a chance, better than nothing.  Yeah, I hope I'd handle it with more grace than those folks, but I can't be sure.  People with no compassion who sneer at the suffering as leeches tend to be the ones who break the fastest when something actually happens to their own precious hide.

Finally, you clearly have no faintest clue what the hell "socialism" might be, so the wise course would be not to drop the word in conversation.

I don't blame her for being scared...any longer and they might have lynched her for her blood or something out of desperation. It's people begging to be helped that I want to see helped the least or not at all, especially if they're begging an ordinary little girl on baseless beliefs that happens to have unusual colored hair and eyes. Their logic is the same as people eating tiger dick as an aphrodisiac. If they have enough energy to stand like it's nothing and shout while begging like the leeches of society (aka socialists), they can more than easily help themselves by taking their own life to end their so called suffering.

Maybe Im looking at this the wrong way, but this manga/series wants to show reincarnated MC tackling on top 10 problems (hunger,poverty, disease, social inequality,etc.)   (At least thats what I have deduced so far)

Still, all this manga has done has done so far is say in very general terms, Problems are bad, Overpowered MC with modern knowledge is going make some Magical solution and then they lived happily ever after. Author doesn't even try to make the problems seem severe in the first place, taking away the gravity and significance of the story. Wouldn't be very farfetched if somehow magical penicillin fell from the sky.

Why doesn't the author talk about consequences, difficulty of implementation, limitations, as well as the necessary sacrifices, giving a much richer backstory?

By this point I can't tell if its bad translation of the source material, or if it is just generally poor writing, albeit the art is good.

Caution: Ranting inside.
Fans and supporters, click it on your own risk.
 

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Everybody should read this to understand the WRONG way to tell a story with manga. The plot itself is probably good, but the way it was presented was so pathetically poor, I just... I just...
Sigh, where should I start?
 
First she was born rich, then she uses modern technology, then suddenly elemental guardians, then illegitimate noble heir, then raising economic welfare, then there's magic stone, then her family was suddenly poor, then corruption, then she remembered her teacher and guardian (bet you forgot they exist, didn't you?), and then thingamagic make them float and teleport and heal...
HOLY SWEET MOTHER OF JESUS, WTF ARE YOU TRYING TO TELL US?
WHAT THE **** IS THE ****ING VOCAL POINT OF THE ****ING PLOT?
Pick a theme, stick with it. Cramming so much plot points don't make a good story.
If anything, it just confuse the reader.

the LN translation started 1st but the manga quickly overtook it

such poor people they were so sick that all they can do is to effortlessly stand and demand a single girl to cure them

Caution: Ranting inside.

Fans and supporters, click it on your own risk.

 

Spoiler

Everybody should read this to understand the WRONG way to tell a story with manga. The plot itself is probably good, but the way it was presented was so pathetically poor, I just... I just...

Sigh, where should I start?

 

First she was born rich, then she uses modern technology, then suddenly elemental guardians, then illegitimate noble heir, then raising economic welfare, then there's magic stone, then her family was suddenly poor, then corruption, then she remembered her teacher and guardian (bet you forgot they exist, didn't you?), and then thingamagic make them float and teleport and heal...

HOLY SWEET MOTHER OF JESUS, WTF ARE YOU TRYING TO TELL US?
WHAT THE **** IS THE ****ING VOCAL POINT OF THE ****ING PLOT?

Pick a theme, stick with it. Cramming so much plot points don't make a good story.
If anything, it just confuse the reader.

the LN translation started 1st but the manga quickly overtook it

Caution: Ranting inside.

Fans and supporters, click it on your own risk.

I imagine it will be something like the black plague or pneumonia or something that Liliana will miraculously cure when she remembers that as a Japanese high school student she learned how to make penicillin like all school students do.

I cant even

Ok. 
But what IS Miasma?
What kind of sickness is it? How does it spread? What does it do precisely? Are we talking bubonic plague or magic afflicted illness? Or does it drain someone until they die? 
I kind of wish the story would explain that a little better so we have the full emotional weight of what's going on.

It's probably this

Basically people putting 'bad/evil air' as the culprit of anything wrong they don't know the actual source of.

Ok. 
But what IS Miasma?
What kind of sickness is it? How does it spread? What does it do precisely? Are we talking bubonic plague or magic afflicted illness? Or does it drain someone until they die? 
I kind of wish the story would explain that a little better so we have the full emotional weight of what's going on.

some kind of dark aura which spread catasthrope, i think

(caution, bad english)

Ok. 
But what IS Miasma?
What kind of sickness is it? How does it spread? What does it do precisely? Are we talking bubonic plague or magic afflicted illness? Or does it drain someone until they die? 
I kind of wish the story would explain that a little better so we have the full emotional weight of what's going on.

Was worried there for a second that she might come forward with more advanced medical knowledge, and find the means to implement it in this place without the proper tools.  I already have a hard time believing she was just a high school student when she died as it is.  Super JK.

Well it depends on what exactly is happening, I think.

 

Either the illness is caused by miasma or the miasma is preventing magic from curing a mundane illness. If it's the former, then most likely Liliana's super-magic will disperse the miasma, but if it's the latter then the hygiene and medical advice can address the illness while the miasma problem will have to be solved another way.

Other possibilities: miasma is a disease of the person's magic. Or is the the start of a undead apocalypse in Heibon? I hope that Yukari got to see "Pride and Prejudice and Zombies" before reincarnating. Though I think that it's second of you're ideas, a magic-resistant strain of illness.

I think miina will heal from the personal hygiene advice, no further treatment needed

Well it depends on what exactly is happening, I think.

Either the illness is caused by miasma or the miasma is preventing magic from curing a mundane illness. If it's the former, then most likely Liliana's super-magic will disperse the miasma, but if it's the latter then the hygiene and medical advice can address the illness while the miasma problem will have to be solved another way.

I hope she does

But since it seems like miasma blocks healing magic, I doubt it's an illness from our world.
From the name "miasma" and the absence of effect from the magic, it might be something like corrupted mana...

I hope Miina heals :'(
Well, Liliana will probably heal her. But still, I want her to go better.

I wonder.  It might be that rather than her knowledge from our world fixing things, Liliana's mega-powerful magic will break through where lesser mages fail.

I imagine it will be something like the black plague or pneumonia or something that Liliana will miraculously cure when she remembers that as a Japanese high school student she learned how to make penicillin like all school students do.

I think miina will heal from the personal hygiene advice, no further treatment needed

I imagine it will be something like the black plague or pneumonia or something that Liliana will miraculously cure when she remembers that as a Japanese high school student she learned how to make penicillin like all school students do.

I hope she does

But since it seems like miasma blocks healing magic, I doubt it's an illness from our world.
From the name "miasma" and the absence of effect from the magic, it might be something like corrupted mana...

I hope Miina heals :'(
Well, Liliana will probably heal her. But still, I want her to go better.

I imagine it will be something like the black plague or pneumonia or something that Liliana will miraculously cure when she remembers that as a Japanese high school student she learned how to make penicillin like all school students do.

It's the dreaded japanese cold again.. rip ;_;

Miasma...

 

What I'm thinking of

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TLpzHHbFrHY

 

Time to improve sanitary.

That's not the only thing that comes to mind...

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