Magika no Kenshi to Shoukan Maou

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Getting 72 lovers is easier than having 72 friends?
That'd probably be a contender for the top 10 of the most ridiculous statements made in manga.

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Getting 72 lovers is easier than having 72 friends?

That'd probably be a contender for the top 10 of the most ridiculous statements made in manga.

Well, IMO I think that raising their levels at the same time without any "romantic" disposition from his part is pretty much difficult.

At some point, one or two of them (if not 5+) will develop feelings for him, because his constant increase on feelings, which will lead to fights, quarrels and more thanks to "I only want to be friends".

To what Lemme wants, the increase of affection- Friendship does not suffice nor it shares the bond she seeks.

So, having 72 friends being harder than 72 lovers? Pfft! OFC it's stupid- but in context- yeah seems pretty impossible. 

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Getting 72 lovers is easier than having 72 friends?

That'd probably be a contender for the top 10 of the most ridiculous statements made in manga.

this is serialized in comic alive. so you might want to change the demographic to seinen.

Added it in description and changed to seinen.

did she just Stardust Revolution the shit outta Nyarlothep?? (was going to say Galaxian Explosion, 'cause the name, but it looked more like Aries's attack)

Did Monirin do porn under another name at one time?

 

I feel like this guy was a former hentai artist.

Despite being credited as Monrin, his 'SDwing' pen name used in Japan is literally on the volume covers even seen here in batoto.

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Add girl too harem, then powerup.

...so, a question to the LN readers, this is probably my jade colored harem glasses talking, but how much weight should I put on this

Spoiler

This series would have been infinitely better with a MC that was a well devleoped character, instead of being a bland self insert. Hes pretty much cardboard instead of an actual human being. 36 chapters in, and most readers simply do not care about the MC. He could die and 99% of readers would not give a shit. His goals, his friends, his troubles, all of them are pretty much irrelevant and undeveloped, because the series is only about scantily clad girls.

 

I am pretty sure most readers dont even bother reading anything that comes out of his mouth because, honestly, who cares? Its pretty much the standard harem MC drivel.

 

>oh noes a hot girl is physically close to me this is bad

>oh noes this opponent is strong

>I should incrase my affection meter with this girl

>We need to save X!

>Huh? You lost me.

>[insert some self-righteous bullshit here]

 

Thats like 90% of his dialogue and thoughts there.

 

I cant even remember what his motivation was supposed to be. Something to do about harmony between swordsmanship and magic or something? It is THAT irrelevant.

 

Most of the girls also have no memorable character traits other than their appearance and near to zero character development other than "this one is a tsundere, this one is the childhood friend, this one is a incestous slut, etc". The swordmanship faculty that wanted to prove they were the equal of the magic faculty is actually better written and I can sympathize with them. Meanwhile, who even remembers what's Kaguya's deal supposed to be? What are her goals/aspirations other than to be the strongest or live up to the family name? At least you can rememeber that Lotte is an outcast that hasnt had a normal life and just wants to survive. You can sympathize with her because she's not even familiar with the concept of friends.

 

It would also have been better if some effort was used to make the premise less retarded. For example, instead of seducing dozens of girls, it would have been better if it was "get their spirits to acknowledge him" or some such. MC would still need to get close to the girls obviously, but at least the premise would sound less retarded (which is actually important, as you dont want readers facepalming and laughing while trying to read your work).

 

Its like the difference between the synopsis of Twilight....and what the synopsis would be like if the author didnt give a shit and just wrote a few lines about how this was about her mary sue self insert fantasy.

 

The character designs and art is really wasted on a shitty author like this. Honestly, i've literally read fanfiction that was better written than this. Zero effort was put into this other than the art. Even Twilight and Eragon had more effort put into them than this, and yes, they are both better written than this. The storyline is a complete mess that shows zero planning other than "okay we need some action scenes for this arc, some ecchi scenes for this arc, so lets come up with some shitty excuse to string them all together".

Your words mean nothing to my dick.

this is serialized in comic alive. so you might want to change the demographic to seinen.

I'm pretty sure he has done some porn at some point or another.  The In-Out pages of the manga releases in the U.S have the original art he's done....all detailed very closely. >3

Did Monirin do porn under another name at one time?

I feel like this guy was a former hentai artist.

My mind says no to the story but my dick says yes. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

This series would have been infinitely better with a MC that was a well devleoped character, instead of being a bland self insert. Hes pretty much cardboard instead of an actual human being. 36 chapters in, and most readers simply do not care about the MC. He could die and 99% of readers would not give a shit. His goals, his friends, his troubles, all of them are pretty much irrelevant and undeveloped, because the series is only about scantily clad girls.

I am pretty sure most readers dont even bother reading anything that comes out of his mouth because, honestly, who cares? Its pretty much the standard harem MC drivel.

>oh noes a hot girl is physically close to me this is bad

>oh noes this opponent is strong

>I should incrase my affection meter with this girl

>We need to save X!

>Huh? You lost me.

>[insert some self-righteous bullshit here]

Thats like 90% of his dialogue and thoughts there.

I cant even remember what his motivation was supposed to be. Something to do about harmony between swordsmanship and magic or something? It is THAT irrelevant.

Most of the girls also have no memorable character traits other than their appearance and near to zero character development other than "this one is a tsundere, this one is the childhood friend, this one is a incestous slut, etc". The swordmanship faculty that wanted to prove they were the equal of the magic faculty is actually better written and I can sympathize with them. Meanwhile, who even remembers what's Kaguya's deal supposed to be? What are her goals/aspirations other than to be the strongest or live up to the family name? At least you can rememeber that Lotte is an outcast that hasnt had a normal life and just wants to survive. You can sympathize with her because she's not even familiar with the concept of friends.

It would also have been better if some effort was used to make the premise less retarded. For example, instead of seducing dozens of girls, it would have been better if it was "get their spirits to acknowledge him" or some such. MC would still need to get close to the girls obviously, but at least the premise would sound less retarded (which is actually important, as you dont want readers facepalming and laughing while trying to read your work).

Its like the difference between the synopsis of Twilight....and what the synopsis would be like if the author didnt give a shit and just wrote a few lines about how this was about her mary sue self insert fantasy.

The character designs and art is really wasted on a shitty author like this. Honestly, i've literally read fanfiction that was better written than this. Zero effort was put into this other than the art. Even Twilight and Eragon had more effort put into them than this, and yes, they are both better written than this. The storyline is a complete mess that shows zero planning other than "okay we need some action scenes for this arc, some ecchi scenes for this arc, so lets come up with some shitty excuse to string them all together".

Kazuki looks older every chapter 

Stress will do that to you. Say what you will about this Harem, but Kazuki is working extra hard to keep everybody together and focused.

Kazuki looks older every chapter 

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please cure that boobs owner now ...

who the fuck drinks vodka by itself? always with other stuff just for the alcohol...

I do..

albeit I do prefer softer mixed drinks when drinking in bar and shots only time to time.. but when drinking at home or before going to bar i usually drink vodka or jägermeister etc. Cheaper and faster not to mention less time spent in toilet due sheer volume of fluids consumed.

Oh yeah, just like those random boss encounter in a musou-game. Now we only need Loki to join to fray to complete the chaos.

Ugh, this is going downhill fast... plot's trying way too hard.

Um... how exactly? If anything i say the plot aren't trying hard enough.

Ugh, this is going downhill fast... plot's trying way too hard.

Can we have an update of the manga as a Christmas present?

who the fuck drinks vodka by itself?

lol, whut?
Are you serious?

One doesn't just take Nyarlathotep down.