Occult Maiden - Hishou - Oni o Tsugu Shounen

Chapter 3:

Page 1, Second Panel: Refer back to Chapter 2 sins

Page 1, Third Panel: There is nothing wrong with studying during your free time. You guys are Asian for fuck’s sake.

Page 3, First Panel: The hallway

Page 3, Second Panel: Wait, so what do they “usually do”?

Page 3, Third Panel: Wow, you have a lot of free time on your hands, don’t you?

Page 4, First Panel: You’ve spent a total of one minute in his presence and you suddenly can say with absolute certainty that he is a failure of an exorcist? Can you sense his power level too?

Page 4, Fourth Panel: If they’re that close, they’re awfully close to kissing. ... Yuri?

Page 5, First Panel: Wait, what? This guy literally just walked through the door, but suddenly he’s separated the both of them at that distance? Magic.

Page 5, Second Panel: Ikr?

Page 5, Third Panel: Aren’t you ashamed?

Page 5, Fourth Panel: I feel the same way.

Page 5, Fifth Panel: He’s not holding you. You can clearly see in the last panel that he might have touched you.

Page 6, First Panel: “Now way”

Page 6, Second Panel: You’re leaving. It’s over.

Page 6, Fourth Panel: Creeeeepy.

Page 6: This scene was retarded.

Page 7, First Panel: Does everything you say have to be vindicated by “Onii-sama”?

Page 7, Fourth Panel: Wait, they were doing your homework? That’s cheating!

Page 8, Fourth Panel: Renge is mad that she has to protect real people.

Pages 9 & 10: There was absolutely no need to blow up the wall.

Page 10, First Panel: No, you’re late. They were there first. You just blew up the wall to meet them.

Page 11, Second Panel: See? This is proof that you’re the one late.

Page 13, Third Panel: Those eyes.

Page 13, Fourth Panel: That Kagura Talisman in the first chapter was not support. That was a fucking nuke talisman. That’s like having Syndra support you. (League of Legends Reference)

Page 14, Fourth Panel: That’s probably why he asked you to seal it...

Page 15, Fourth Panel: I know. I KNOW.

Page 15, Fifth Panel: Because the author is trying to pretend like he put action in this chapter, even though he conveniently skipped all the difficult battle scenes. Lazy author is lazy.

Page 16, First Panel: You are. You know you are, don’t ask.

Page 16, Fourth Panel: This guy’s mouth. Is that his tongue or fangs?

Page 17, First Panel: This guy’s pants.

Page 17, Second Panel: Ginchiyo just got done introducing him. Pay attention.

Page 17, Second Panel: Also, this guy’s face.

Page 17, Fourth Panel: But you can judge a guy by the pants he wears. And those pants are hideous.

Page 18, First Panel: The chain Tenyou was wearing disappears in this panel, but reappears two panels later.

Page 18, Fourth Panel: Which is why you’re here. Talking with people who have the job you don’t want. You don’t deserve to spend your youth doing fun stuff.

Page 20: Great. If I were to nuke this one place, the manga would end.

Number of Sins: 36

Punishment: Yuge Tenyou’s pants. (Fashion suicide.)

Chapter 1:

Page 4, Second Panel: "Husband and Wife" cliche

Page 5, First Panel: "Dense MC" cliche

Page 5, Second Panel: So how is she airheaded in this scene?

Page 6: How does this teacher not know that this guy is an exorcist? You mean to tell me this is the first time he's heard about this? There's a huge crowd later surrounding a curse, so spiritual anomalies are clearly well known. And Chikage is the head of a freaking clan. This teacher doesn't really know his students does he?

Page 7, Second Panel: You're saying goodbye to a door.

Page 8, Third Panel: Wow, these Guardians suck at their job. Couldn't erect barrier in time. Get some Viagra why don't you.

Page 12: Renge's Hair.

Page 14, First Panel: No, what were you expecting? Santa Claus?

Page 14, Fourth Panel: Again, what were you expecting? For the Ayakashi to give you a warning?

Page 16: Why is she late again? They go to the same high school, so they should have left together. Did she get another ride from someone else? With gas prices these days, that's not very cost effective.

Page 16: Also, token almost-imouto character.

Page 17 Third Panel: Yeah, praise Ritsuka too.

Page 18, Third Panel: Look at people when you talk to them. Rude.

Page 19: There are no sins on this page.

Page 20: You guys wait until now to transform? Shouldn't you have done that earlier?
Page 21, Third Panel: How is Ritsuka supposed to support from behind? She's got a sword!

Page 22, First Panel: You've already told us this.

Page 22, First Panel: Also, Ritsuka, you're supposed to be in the back.

Page 23: Chikage, if you wanted to end this quick, then you would have done that earlier.

Page 26: You guys are the Guardians right? Stop gossiping and do your fucking job already.

Page 26, Third Panel: You guys can't even do your own jobs correctly and now you're bitching about his? Fuck off.

Page 28: Gee, thanks a lot Guardian guys. You guys let another one in.

Page 34: Fucking Christ you Guardians! DO YOUR FUCKING JOB! 

Page 36, Fourth Panel: Even the Aragami can erect a barrier. Hire him instead.

Page 38: "Flashback to tell backstory" cliche.

Page 39, Third Panel: Stay away? I thought he had no spiritual powers so he couldn't see Ayakashi. You've been lying to us Chikage.

Page 47:  How were you kept alive by the demon eye? You looked fine in the past few pages, albeit missing an eye.

Page 48, First Panel: Fucking Guardians man.

Page 49, First Panel: Why are they looking up? Shouldn't they be looking straight ahead? Look at people when you speak to them dammit.

Page 50: Okay, there is no reason to get hit in this panel. He has to project his spirit energy outward, which by the way he has none, but he does this on page 52. After he's been hit.

Page 54: No, he hasn't been waiting for the right time. He's been fucking around. He should have used it in the very beginning.

Page 55: He has no freaking spiritual power. He CAN'T make a spirit talisman because you need SPIRITUAL POWERS. 

Page 57, Fourth Panel: He's wounded. Get off him.

Page 57, Fifth Panel: This is the first chapter. Last boss my ass.

Page 60, Second Panel: How does she know their Tsuchimikado? They could be from the other exorcist families for all she knows.

Page 60, Fourth Panel: No, this is not your fault. It was the Guardians'.

Page 62: Obvious Villain is Obvious.

Chapter 2:

Page 2: This girl doesn't know how to play Mario.

Page 3, Second Panel: Uboaa.

Page 3, Fourth Panel: Mario isn't two player.

Page 3, Fourth Panel: She just died. What's not to comprehend?

Page 4, Fourth Panel: She clotheslined an Ayakashi in the first chapter. How the fuck is she ranged?

Page 5, Third Panel: Worst Backstory ever.

Page 8: So... How is this bad again? Reiju seem pretty useful to me. You use them to get stronger and then in turn stop more curses from happening. Shouldn't regular exorcists be able to power up from these? This is like a ban on EXP points.

Page 11, First Panel: Don't insult him like that. He's helping you with homework. Be grateful, bitch.

Page 12: Bitch, I don't know who you are, but study groups after school is not "fooling around". 

Page 12: Also, you're wearing the same uniform as them. You're fooling around at school too. Moreso even.

Number of Sins: 46

Punishment: No barrier during a curse. (Because the Guardians suck.)