Big Order

So we picked this up, but as you can see there was a panel that I couldn't redraw (Page 14, Panel 2: I just made a box around the place), so we are in DIRE need of a good Redrawer as the next chapter already has way more panels to redraw than this.

Also Thanks to Tactless for spontaneously QCing the chapter.

We don't intend to redo the last chapters that another group did, so here are some things that my TL Anon gathered and the scanlation of the last two chapters didn't mention rightfully (Besides the really bad english & some bullshit translations e.g „Sorry, Iyo. I have to do this.“ turning to „Iyo…! Fuck you!“):

Also the DDL Folder is here: https://www.mediafire.com/folder/c90ga0vazxtcu

The fuck is this translation?  I just read chapter 22 in japanese myself, and he doesn't say "fuck you", he says "Sorry Iyo, but I've gotta go."  That's not even mentioning the broken third world english.

Hey hey hey.

Not all third world countries are like that, y'know.

There are some that have a long tradition of learning the English language.

Like mine... and my neighbor country... and their neighbor country.

Sorry for my bad english...

You just need more time to learn before you step on the stage.

Don't feel down.

Instead use this opportunity to push yourself further.

All languages are about practice.

The more you practice the better you get.

Also the errors I mentioned are only a fraction of the total.

There are other errors.

So I sincerely suggest that the scanlation group should get a proper editor.

Hum, yeah...Translation for chapter 23 is a bit wonky... Appreciate the effort though.

I'm talking about ch 23 which seems to have been removed.

Sentences are missing minor but crucial words.

Many of the sentences use words that people normally don't use in that way.

The translator should use more contractions.

Like I said, it feels like a pseudo-caveman or someone-who-likes-to-show-off-his-vocabulary speaking.

Please fix.

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Example:

Pg 3: Okay I finish my job and I leave.

Fix: Okay. I'll wrap up my work here and leave.

 

Pg 4: He speaks surely of Sena. She should not to be very far. (no one speaks that way in RL)

Fix: He's definitely talking about Sena. She shouldn't be far.

 

Pg 6: I waiting you (pseudo-caveman)

Fix: I've been waiting for you.

 

Pg 7: He may be split?

Fix: He can divide/split himself?

 

Pg 8: He fuses with my throat!

You jump into the trap without thinking you thought to fight alone

You thought we did not think you were going to save your sister?

Fix: It fused with my neck/throat!

You jumped right into our trap without thinking.

Were you thinking of fighting me/us alone?

Did you think we wouldn't realise you were going to save your sister?

 

etc etc etc

 

Pg 13: We fusion our orders.

And we will become friend.

It's a mad.

Fix: We'll combine/fuse our orders

And we'll become friends/And then we'll be friends.

He's insane./Is he insane?/A madman?/etc

 

etc etc etc

It gets worse the more the pages progress. Shall I continue?

All the above errors are something an editor fixes.

It's the editor's job to smooth out the awkward sentences.

I won't say it's a horrible attempt.

It's actually better than the other horrible ones I've seen.

But it needs just a bit more experience.

In the scanlations who translate the mangas from english to spanish, the editors' job isn't do "the smooth out the awkward sentences", this is work of the proofreader or of the translator, and the guy who edit this chapter is from another spanish scanlation, that's why I ask before you if something is wrong in the edition of the chapter. Sorry for my bad english...

The fuck is this translation?  I just read chapter 22 in japanese myself, and he doesn't say "fuck you", he says "Sorry Iyo, but I've gotta go."  That's not even mentioning the broken third world english.

What is the problem with the edition?

I'm talking about ch 23 which seems to have been removed.

Sentences are missing minor but crucial words.

Many of the sentences use words that people normally don't use in that way.

The translator should use more contractions.

Like I said, it feels like a pseudo-caveman or someone-who-likes-to-show-off-his-vocabulary speaking.

Please fix.

It gets worse the more the pages progress. Shall I continue?

All the above errors are something an editor fixes.

It's the editor's job to smooth out the awkward sentences.

I won't say it's a horrible attempt.

It's actually better than the other horrible ones I've seen.

But it needs just a bit more experience.

I have only one thing to say about the newest chapter.

It's not like I don't appreciate your work. I am thankful.

But partway through... It feels like pseudo-cavemen speaking.

Get an editor and a proofreader. Redo it. And then post the new version.

What is the problem with the edition?

I have only one thing to say about the newest chapter.

It's not like I don't appreciate your work. I am thankful.

But partway through... It feels like pseudo-cavemen speaking.

Get an editor and a proofreader. Redo it. And then post the new version.

 
Or maybe just a different one.
The way it is now, the story is really hard to follow.

 

By the way: pages 25 and 26 were almost the same. Is there a reason for that?

there is a difference, put I forgot to delete the page 25

thanks for the chapter, but I think you guys really need a proofreader...

 
Or maybe just a different one.
The way it is now, the story is really hard to follow.

By the way: pages 25 and 26 were almost the same. Is there a reason for that?

thanks for the chapter, but I think you guys really need a proofreader...

An Anime for Big Order is is distributed by 2016 given the good reviews (about 10 episodes)

pour Kurenai : Shiori Mikami (A characher in Yuru Yuri)

Son of a bitch

This manga start out great and all, great potential, but halfway it's plot got bitten by a zombie, so at the moment it is half dead, half alive, it's brain and flesh are sure to rot to the core. 

Just finished 22 chapter and now i mad like hell, it is a crime to mess up such a good setting like this one.

Informations about Big Order's OAV :
 
Studio : Asread 

 
voices : 
 
Pour Eiji : Masakazu Morita (Ichigo in BLEACH)
pour Kurenai : Shiori Mikami (A characher in Yuru Yuri)
Pour Sena : Misaki Kuno (Akane in Durarara!!)
Pour Daisy : Misaki Mari (new in the business)
Pour Gennai : Satoshi Tsuruoka (Zank in Akame Ga Kill)
Pour Hiiragi : Shinnosuke Tachibana (new in the business)
Pour Benkei : Fumihiko Tachiki (Ikari in Evangelion)
Pour Iyo : Azusa Tadokoro (Murasaki in Tokyo ESP)
Pour Ayahito : Yū Hayashi (Ogiwara in Kuruko no basket)
Pour Fran : tarusuke shingaki (Eishirou in New Prince of Tennis)
 
Opening's music : 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QVvN3Hv7s7s
 
OR
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sr7hSCtcd6Y
 
in any case, it's Yousei Teikoku in their new album SHADOW CORPS[e]
 

All this information comes from the Japanese Wikipedia of Big Order.

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It's ALIVE!!!

The pacing is just all over the place.

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And why the hell Hiiragi can't make the sisters ilness from fact to fiction just like he fixed everyone else?

This doesn't make any sense.

This is like a lame Code Geass.

The pacing is just all over the place.

 

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And why the hell Hiiragi can't make the sisters ilness from fact to fiction just like he fixed everyone else?

 

This doesn't make any sense.

Because he has a time limit. Beyond that, his ability is useless.

The pacing is just all over the place.

This doesn't make any sense.

Oh thank god i decided to leave the initial release. My eyes were bleeding out from the translation. At least now it is properly proofread Thanks.

"Iyo...Fuck You"

Best Line, EVER