RPG

Why do all RPG-fantasy authors like to introduce insane death penalties?..

Well, at least it's not as bad as Ark with losing stats forever, or LMS with a whole day to rez...

I think you are absolutely correct.
It is impossible for these scenes to work the way they do, if you remove one aspect of the jokes.
If you remove the tsukkomis, they no longer work as tsukkomis.

...Look, man, what are you trying to prove..?

You simply cannot present to me her tsukkomi, bobobo reactions and then say: "You see? She needs to make tsukkomis here, or else it does not work."
Of course she needs to tsukkomi-react in order to make a tsukkomi-reaction scene work. That's not only sophism, it's tautology.
My argument, was that the author could've written those scenes in a passive-aggressive, cynical manner, like most of his initial jokes in the manwha -- instead of doing this. He could've written that entire part differently, which would completely avoid the necessity of tsukkomis.

How about this:

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"Oh look a diamond"
"No, don--"
snaps shot.
slowly facepalms herself
"Oh lol look I can slip pass it"
leaves
"Hey, no, wait for me~~"

No need for eye-bulging, no need for bloody tsukkomis. Nothing. And my example is relatively more over the top than it should be.
Don't try to honestly build a pseudo-logical argument, when all you say is: "I like it, you don't". That's obvious. And I stated as much: I hate tsukkomis. I hate them. I think it is possible to make funniez without tsukkomis. The author simply needs to not plan his jokes in that fashion, and the problem is solved. You seem to enjoy them, which is honestly fine and dandy for you, but that doesn't contradict my first comment, which simply stated: "Oh boy, I sure do hate tsukkomis. And I hope I won't see any more Bobobo reactions in this thing ever again."
If you want to lecture someone, don't dump that intellectual-angst on my arse.

Less weeaboo and more English, please.

wait until the betrayel of his guild members was about something stupid as hell like favorite anime or something.

Why does all korean mangaka create such stupid and unbalanced mmorpg, that would fail in months as a business?

Because Korean/Asian MMOs are usually unbalanced and stupid. It's their actual reality. It's the home of the P2W game, afterall.

Why does all korean mangaka create such stupid and unbalanced mmorpg, that would fail in months as a business?

He's a top Priest, so just ress her, lol

Here buddy :

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Or if you prefer completion

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There buddy , does it look weird and unnatural ? Yes , yes it does , because this page need these stupid monologue to feel natural , or else it just feel weird and dry , and the author should just remove this whole page , But then the whole shiny stone and bar trap scheme won't even be needed , then he should skip the whole first trap thingy , then at the second trap , getting caught up in is just stupid and nonsensical , then how can he make the second trap scene make sense to further the plots ? He has to show that Rai is kinda stupid and headfirst in the prior scene , what screen ? That first trap screen didn't exist ?

 Wait what? THen what does this whole chapter are for ? Nothing , it's a stupid nonsensical chapter that served no purpose .

 

You see , everything is there to serve a reason , to further the plot naturally without being forced and weird .

I think you are absolutely correct.
It is impossible for these scenes to work the way they do, if you remove one aspect of the jokes.
If you remove the tsukkomis, they no longer work as tsukkomis.

...Look, man, what are you trying to prove..?

You simply cannot present to me her tsukkomi, bobobo reactions and then say: "You see? She needs to make tsukkomis here, or else it does not work."
Of course she needs to tsukkomi-react in order to make a tsukkomi-reaction scene work. That's not only sophism, it's tautology.
My argument, was that the author could've written those scenes in a passive-aggressive, cynical manner, like most of his initial jokes in the manwha -- instead of doing this. He could've written that entire part differently, which would completely avoid the necessity of tsukkomis.

How about this:

good stuff

"The king of 'act first, think later'!"
slips through the bars
"The bars are hella spread apart!"

..Tsk, I really hate tsukkomis. I really hope this manwha won't turn into Bobobo. Not every joke needs commentary which explains to the audience how funny that joke was. It's okay, author, I can outline the jokes myself.
What I liked about the early chapters, was that the jokes were self-evident. When the prota fudged up, nobody needed to explain to us he fudged.

And, again, god damnit, you guys. You update this thing really quickly.
Also, whomever in your group decided to typeset: "WUH MAH GAWT". I love you.

@Kuroiikawa
With the humor of this manwha, I bet the culprit will reveal itself as a dolphin. A dolphin with remarkable, flowing hair.

Here buddy :

"The king of 'act first, think later'!"
slips through the bars
"The bars are hella spread apart!"

..Tsk, I really hate tsukkomis. I really hope this manwha won't turn into Bobobo. Not every joke needs commentary which explains to the audience how funny that joke was. It's okay, author, I can outline the jokes myself.
What I liked about the early chapters, was that the jokes were self-evident. When the prota fudged up, nobody needed to explain to us he fudged.

And, again, god damnit, you guys. You update this thing really quickly.
Also, whomever in your group decided to typeset: "WUH MAH GAWT". I love you.

@Kuroiikawa
With the humor of this manwha, I bet the culprit will reveal itself as a dolphin. A dolphin with remarkable, flowing hair.

LMAO! We have Rai who's carefree as fuck; Appetizer who cries easily; Katana who can't type even if his life mattered on it, and now we have an Archer who can't hit for shit. XD

and a brute who's just an M.

it's really dimwit i want to cry ahahaha ;;w;;

Something just occurred to me.

The prota claimed his account got hacked, and all of his possessions got stolen in the process. Surely, that means that someone had an access to his character, and could do anything he wanted with said character (the prota even woke up near a death-dragon, so the hacker probably tried something).
...Which means, whomever hacked the prota's account, was such a giant gaping asshole -- that he never bothered to use the non-transferable item in order to unseal the expansion of the game.

"Hey, this guy has the only key to the expansion of the game...! I can unseal the new continent with this character, switch to my character, and be the first guy to conquer the expansion! .....Huh? What? I need some key to make it work? Well, let's look for it! I have at least 2 years until this guy decides to comeback!"

or not.
With all of the fudge that I thought was not bad enough to call bullshit on, this one takes the cake.
This is something that better be touched upon at some point in the story: "Why didn't the hacker unseal the New Continent."
While it does not stop the story from being entertaining , it is a pretty big plothole to be left alone like that.
P.S: Fuck me, you guys translate+edit this thing quickly. Nice.

Inb4 the guy who hacked him and stole all his stuff reappears with the sexy ponytail cosmetic.

Something just occurred to me.

The prota claimed his account got hacked, and all of his possessions got stolen in the process. Surely, that means that someone had an access to his character, and could do anything he wanted with said character (the prota even woke up near a death-dragon, so the hacker probably tried something).
...Which means, whomever hacked the prota's account, was such a giant gaping asshole -- that he never bothered to use the non-transferable item in order to unseal the expansion of the game.

"Hey, this guy has the only key to the expansion of the game...! I can unseal the new continent with this character, switch to my character, and be the first guy to conquer the expansion! .....Huh? What? I need some key to make it work? Well, let's look for it! I have at least 2 years until this guy decides to comeback!"

or not.
With all of the fudge that I thought was not bad enough to call bullshit on, this one takes the cake.
This is something that better be touched upon at some point in the story: "Why didn't the hacker unseal the New Continent."
While it does not stop the story from being entertaining , it is a pretty big plothole to be left alone like that.
P.S: Fuck me, you guys translate+edit this thing quickly. Nice.

"Oh no! A story about vidjeo games is exhibiting plot-devices which appeared in vidjeo games! How dare he!"
Jokes aside, I hardly give a damn if this story tries to be original or not. That's clearly not the point behind it, this story is whimsy-incarnate, it just wants to have a jolly good time and toss off. As long as it is not literally ripping off jokes from other media, and then praising itself for being so c00lz, I'm cool with it. There's nothing new under the sun, and we're not sponsors whom are listening in to pilot-pitching here.

That being said, chapters 7-8... What the frig is up with that pseudo-tear jerking melodrama? That was morbidly unnecessary.
A story about pure comedy dove head-first into the gastric ocean of drama in one fell swoop, and there's only one appropriate reason to commit such thematic-suicide:
"I ran out of ideas, you guys."
 

I really hope this manwha won't devolve into character-driven drama. That's practically why I abandoned School Rumble at its early stages.
The humor ranged from pleasant to painful purely because the narrative zoomed into the character's weaknesses and problems, I could not ass myself to care about any of the character's problems, because all of them are idiots and idiots deserve no sympathy. I find it really hard to appreciate a comedic story when it focuses so heavily on how stupid a character is, rather focus on how many circumstances can be created from the character's actions.

P.S: I'm really hoping for no romance in this thing. Next to the drama, it's the last thing this purely-comedic story needs.
RomCom....*shudder*

I'm rooting you, Leon. Go do something amazingly heroic and self-sacrificing to win her love. Then she can step all over you for the rest of your life, you M.

 Thank you, Game of Scanlation. Specially Aemon and Sam, you are the best.

You say as if it is certain that the author copied that event. Besides, there is no need to even copy that.

There is nothing extraordinary about a world quest where a unique server item is produced, and bound

to the crafter's account. The obvious drama you can come up with that, is for that crafter to never login

again before completing the quest. 

 

I didn't play WoW, so it's original for me. 

lets not forget everquest had 1 per server items years before WoW... but hey everything WoW did was "Original" copied Everquest content so

The basis of this story happened in WoW.

 

An endgame guild on one server got the special, one-per-server item needed to unlock the expansion area (Burning Crusade) and they refused to do. GG filthy casuals. Oh and this happened about 10 years ago.

 

But this story is totally original amirite?

You say as if it is certain that the author copied that event. Besides, there is no need to even copy that.

There is nothing extraordinary about a world quest where a unique server item is produced, and bound

to the crafter's account. The obvious drama you can come up with that, is for that crafter to never login

again before completing the quest. 

I didn't play WoW, so it's original for me. 

You make it sound like playing WoW makes you superior in some way lol. 

The basis of this story happened in WoW.

An endgame guild on one server got the special, one-per-server item needed to unlock the expansion area (Burning Crusade) and they refused to do. GG filthy casuals. Oh and this happened about 10 years ago.

But this story is totally original amirite?