Shishunki no Iron Maiden

The only thing I didnt like about the ending was Haruki's mom.

I mean, it says she got fired right? Doesnt that suck?

What about their finances?

Wheres his dad?

Super minor thing but it still bothered me.

Good read though, heh giggity.

No other story's antagonist has pissed me off so badly. On almost every level, those bad guys were seriously evil.

It's even more annoying since they never get actual punishment. I demand satisfaction!

So whats the point for nimex dor capturing the girls its kinda like they doing it just for the plot. But not any actual reason either its good and bad  

Spoiler

Yeah they capture it for that color-iron-thing and then what? The girls is just having normal routine. And nothing happen

At first i give it 8/10 but after done reading it i give it 5/10 -its okay-

The story was actually interesting and thrilling until she was captured. Then it just rather ended without much impact. I'd recommend it up to the climax:

No other story's antagonist has pissed me off so badly. On almost every level, those bad guys were seriously evil.

You know I don't really know what I expected reading this series this far.

It wasn't particularly good, and the characters weren't that likable either.

Kinda makes me feel like I wasted my time, but whatever its over now.

well, that was actually kinda nice IMO.

They should just conclude with them openly going out though xD

I have a losing streak on slark....

If you have a losing streak on slark you're clearly not picking doom enough

What a nice read.

I know it was a comedy and we're not supposed to think too deeply.... but I just can't get over the antagonist was just a glorified paedophile.

Also for children who just had sex, surely she would be more pissed that he's still fooling around with girls.

While the monomyth is a perfectly reasonable system by which to judge a story, keep in mind that certain aspects may not change while other major aspects of someone can. A persons personality is allowed to remain the same while their behavior, outlook, and so on change. 

I would agree with that, if the battle in the story was to "regain one's normality"...But they never fought to regain their initial agenda, they fought to get closer to each other, to become a couple. To have an actual relationship. They fought to upgrade their "distant friends" state, into a "lovers" state.
When all of that fighting goes down the drain.....When what they fought for is being ignored and deleted, I find it hard not to think : "Well, that was pointless."

In short, I think the "major aspects" of the prota's personality, did not change.
Still, it's comedic and amusing. So, what the heck.

Can't get over the fact the human body only has about 4 grams of iron in it, spread out, at once.

So at the end of the day, absolutely nothing changed.
Well, gee manga, I know the Monomyth, the Hero's Journey ends where it starts -- but the peeps have to change. Having all of that character-development flushed down the toilet for a quick buck of a joke where the cast does "the old comedy routine hoohoo!" is just shitting in my mouth, and I'm not into coprophilia.
That's not how catharsis works, neither does it give any closure. It's merely an artificial sense of security which brings about nothing but lament that the entire journey was pretty much pointless.
(If that guy's personality didn't change, they'll just break off after 6 months or less. Unless the girl has immense daddy-issues for the want of an emotionally unavailable punk...But that's a whole different tragedy story.)

Welp, this manga was amusing for what it was. I wouldn't say it's bad or good. Just "meh".

While the monomyth is a perfectly reasonable system by which to judge a story, keep in mind that certain aspects may not change while other major aspects of someone can. A persons personality is allowed to remain the same while their behavior, outlook, and so on change. 

Thanks Casanova for your work in this series. It was a fun read, I have enjoyed it quite a lot and I have nothing negative to say about the ending so that is a big plus to me, there are so many series with awful endings, a decent end is always welcome, thanks again and happy new year.

she never showed her ... tongue??

Yeah, just imagine every single thing you can do with tongue... I'll let your imagination work :s

It would have been nice if he gave his shirt to her though. Since she was originally naked to begin with.

So he'll wear the pants and she'll wear his shirt.

 

But maybe he did it with his clothes on while she wrapped herself in the blanket.

Nah, we all know that she's the one who is wearing the pants in the relationship.

remember it guys
sex ! Sex is always the answer guys

For some weird reason, the boys always still have their clothes on in such scene, even though the girls are completely naked under a blanket.

Well, who would want to see the boys naked anyway....

It would have been nice if he gave his shirt to her though. Since she was originally naked to begin with.

So he'll wear the pants and she'll wear his shirt.

But maybe he did it with his clothes on while she wrapped herself in the blanket.

I have a losing streak on slark....

I have a losing streak on slark....

she never showed her ... tongue??

The boy clothes were still on, so I doubt they did anything. 

 

Well it idiot the MC still being a punk.

For some weird reason, the boys always still have their clothes on in such scene, even though the girls are completely naked under a blanket.

Well, who would want to see the boys naked anyway....

Sex solves everything ..?