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Hatsukoi ni Oboreta
| Alt Names: |  Juonteki na Kanojo My Grudging Girlfriend Sweet Cool |
| Author: | Sakurada Hina |
| Artist: | Sakurada Hina |
| Genres: |  Drama Romance School Life Shoujo Smut |
| Type: | Manga (Japanese) |
| Status: | Complete |
| Description: | Compilation of short stories. |
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The first story was really touching and I liked the art but I don't get how the guy didn't notice that the girl's mother abused her. They grew up together and were close enough for him to let himself in. Plus all the other neighbours knew about it so he must have been very blind and deaf to not notice.
Second and third simply weren't convincing, especially in comparison with the first. Where the first places emphasis on love not being the same as going out on a whim, the third tells you the exact opposite. And the second states that you fix a broken heart by falling in love with the one consoling you, now while I know that that actually works for some people it's also contradicted by the first. The Art also wasn't on pair with the first. Are they really all by the same author?
That last story could have been good if someone else wrote it. I have nothing against shoujo formula, I have nothing against the "hot guy stuck with unlikely girl, falls for her" schtick, it would have been nice to see the "not just gloomy and loner, but actually horror aficionado a la 'Wallflower'" variant -- if there had been even a remotely spirited pretense at character. There was nothing, it was empty.
The first story wasn't bad though.
In general, these are all cliche, predictable plots. (But in shoujo, the girl gets the guy, the guy gets the girl, it's shoujo.)
The last story was simple and not very deep at all, but I liked the creepy girl. It was funny.
If anything, the second story / chapter 4 was my least favorite. It was very meh.
As for the art, big eyes, big heads. Slender limbs, necks. Elongated. A plus nose game for everyone. A different style, not perfected, but it certainly didn't bother me. I actually quite liked it.
Meh.
I just read the last story, and it was mediocre and boring. Boy asks "creepy" girl out on a bet, finds out she's pretty and "falls in love" with her. Many things could be said about this kind of thoughtless plot, but to be honest, it's such a common story and done so poorly that it feels pointless to critique it.
The art could use a lot of improvement. The characters' anatomy is off, and it's especially noticeable when they're together. Overall, I'd say the (probably) rookie mangaka just needs time and experience to improve.
The art is nice in all of them. The first one is my least favorite, truthfully. It would have been better if it was a bit longer, to develop some of the stuff that was mentioned in it. Last one was funny, maybe my favorite.
Not much smut in it, though. XD
Pretty interesting.