Doukyonin no Binandomo

Yeah, it was like... It was rushing faster and faster as the first five chapters progressed, but it was still basically coherent up until the last chapter. Like, it starts at warp 8, ramps up to warp nine, and then chapter six is that episode of voyager where Janeway and the other dude go so fast they turn into gross toad rat things. Like, literally, we see the older brother's plane fly away, but then he's inexplicably sitting on the couch drinking coffee and talking about a DIFFERENT character might leave or whatever. It makes no sense at all.

well that escalated and ended quite quickly.....

The premise was nothing new but had potential initially. As the story moves on, the relationship just jump from stage to stage which in the end created a lack of depth and the feeling of being rushed.

Thanks anyways staff at Dangerous Pleasures!