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not explaining every single little thing isn't poor storytelling. i still haven't seen anything that i didn't understand, or that couldn't just be explained at a later point in the series. the memory loss was properly explained, for those who payed attention to detail as they read.

 

i personally find a story much more annoying if too much is explained. what makes a story interesting is when things can be interpreted in different ways, but there are some clues along the way.

It's not a lack of explaining ~everything~, it's the time jumps, the lack of full conversation, the random things that have no flow physically or storytelling wise. Are you sure you haven't just filled in with what you're hoping it will be?

Edit: rereading your comment, yep, you're filling it in with what you want, which is poor storytelling. If I want to make up my own conclusions to stories, I'll just continue working on my own stuff. If I am reading someone else's work, they need to do their job and tell their story. This isn't a make your own adventure video game >__>

The most sad thing for me about the removal is that I was giving it time to build up...but now, now I have nothing to read  #ThanksObama

That's really weird. I only saw that there's an update because I was just searching through lists of manga. I have this under my follows...is there a problem, or am I not get something here???

Oh thank god that extra chapter helps to understand the story sooo much. Love the author's sense of humor

The author is relying too heavily on poor storytelling methods, such as not explaining anything to "leave it up to our interpretations." That's just lazy storytelling. This has such potential but things like you pointed out are seriously holding it back. The audience can't get immersed because it's very inconsistent :\

not explaining every single little thing isn't poor storytelling. i still haven't seen anything that i didn't understand, or that couldn't just be explained at a later point in the series. the memory loss was properly explained, for those who payed attention to detail as they read.

i personally find a story much more annoying if too much is explained. what makes a story interesting is when things can be interpreted in different ways, but there are some clues along the way.

So season 2 he's grown and left the school?  Oh please god make it happen, it even has an adventure tag!

God..... that was so depressing. 

 

 

I'm a little confused on how the memory forgetting process works though. I wish the author elaborated a little on that. Did he just store his memory's in something else and lock them away? Did he just forget everything? God, it's so confusing 

 

 

This will make the story much more exciting though so I'm looking forward to it

The author is relying too heavily on poor storytelling methods, such as not explaining anything to "leave it up to our interpretations." That's just lazy storytelling. This has such potential but things like you pointed out are seriously holding it back. The audience can't get immersed because it's very inconsistent :\

The new season has finally started on Naver

yeah, thought so. love can be really cruel.

wut? wutwutwut???
Kashin... whaaaaat??
... he's a bastard indeed... a good guy, but a bastard...

Now that's what i call a good twist.

Dang, did not expect that.

wow...

that new chapter?? THAT'S NOT EEEEENGLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISH!!

He was defending himself... Not exactly.  With his power, he could have chosen to incapacitate people.  He intentionally killed them.  That's the reason the bounty kept being raised, because he was killing people.  By your logic, if I commit a crime and the police come to arrest me, I can get out a shotgun and blow them away, because I am defending myself and I wouldn't be doing anything wrong.  I don't care if people kill others who threaten their lives, but cops are trying to CAPTURE him, not kill him.  

Please, remember to use the SPOILER tag for wall text and quotes.

~Riku

Memory loss...the drama tool I hate the most.

I'm a little confused on how the memory forgetting process works though. I wish the author elaborated a little on that. Did he just store his memory's in something else and lock them away? Did he just forget everything? God, it's so confusing 

i think he wrote that bit in melly's notebook, so it really just... disappears...

God..... that was so depressing. 

I'm a little confused on how the memory forgetting process works though. I wish the author elaborated a little on that. Did he just store his memory's in something else and lock them away? Did he just forget everything? God, it's so confusing 

This will make the story much more exciting though so I'm looking forward to it  

And now my heart is the one that's crushed. Simply devastating end to that arc.

Both regime and Ran already killed to achieve their goals. I don't think one life is worth more than many, but I also don't believe one life is less than many. Up to everyone's individual conscience.

well I mean, he's killing people to get to a goal.... no matter what the goal is and if he's defending himself or not, he's killing people. And plus, it's not like the police officers are trying to kill him.... while he's trying to kill the police officers. 

 

I would still count that murder 

Still, with the right lawyer, he could get it to become involuntary manslaughter =_=

I would still count that murder 

Again, use the SPOILER tag on wall texts and quotes.

~Riku

No kidding. We aren't even talking about murdering one person, we are talking about MASS MURDER.  

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Mass murder that he is committing to bring a dead person back to life, I mean, this is FMA all over again.  There needs to be a limit where people say, "Oh, my friend is killing people left and right for the sake of a dead girl. He probably needs mental help.  Maybe I should stop protecting him and save a few dozen people?"

Think about it though. If everyone went on killing sprees when someone close to them died, there'd be nobody left in the world in a week.  

 

He's being a drama queen. He has a son. He should have lived for the sake of his son.  Instead he pushes his (and her) child off on someone else and becomes a mass murderer.  Putting his friend(who's taking care of his child) in danger and leaving his son to live a lonely life (because it would be too dangerous if someone found out who he was).  Even if he brings her back to life, if i were her, I wouldn't forgive him. Of course, this is a webtoon and if it goes with manga logic then she (as a heroine) will probably forgive everything because their love is so strong and he's a good person underneath or some shit logic like that.  sorry. rant over.

well, to be honest all those people he kill are people who are in the way or police who wants to capture him. So its kind of wrong to call him a mass murder when in a way he is defending himself. I mean if he is randomly killing people with no reason at all than we can say he is a mass murder but what he is doing is not really murder. I mean if a soldier go to war and go to another country to fight, do we call them murders because they kill other people. We don't, we call them heroes, well, if you are in the same country as they are but we don't call them murders. In the world of trump the world is so mess up that if you defy the word of the creator you are subjected to imprisonment or even death. In the world they live in, this one person call Ran is trying to revive his love one and in doing so made the world his enemy. If he defending himself from people who are trying to imprison him or kill him, do you qualify him as a murderer because i am pretty sure the only people he kill are cops and people who are threatening his life or his love one. 

Its his father's very own fault he got it crushed. Sry...but he kills with little to no remorse so he should be allowed to be happy go lucky with his son while other kids grow up as orphans?

 

And I can't really understand his friends either. I might keep my mouth shut about stealing, driving to fast or tax fraud but if one of my friends commits murder or rape I'd be the first to tell on him to the police.

No kidding. We aren't even talking about murdering one person, we are talking about MASS MURDER.