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Someone spoil me, does Hikaru end up with ANY of them?

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Nope it´s not. The brother told his sister that he can´t have sex with her. And the sisters answers that she is happy cause her brother played the role of her Husband als long as the parents in a foreigen Country. And the little Kid is another sibling.and only pretends / plays the role of thier child.

 

So the familiy consist of the parents and three Siblings.

so it didn't happen

it's just weird even if they are pretending

jesus christ ease up on the TL notes my man

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Spoiler tags exist. Here, have some:

That last chapter translated in german... am i understanding well the ending is INCEST?!?!

She's just a child, She's just a child, She's just a child, She's just a child, She's just a child ... Dammit ... Now I'm questioning my morals ... Thanks Tora Yasu

Will take into effect, and well, technically, I could be the proofreader of my own work (I believe so.... maybe..)...

 

Anyway, thanks for the criticism and advise!

I just went back and reread Chapter 92.  The revised version looks great.

I suggest using other font that is easier to read for the dialouges (Like "Wild Words"), or you can try to recruit other typesetter (and other staff like cleaner, redrawer, etec.). There are many people who are happy to help on this community

Word of advise from another scanalator... don't put translation notes/comments on literally 2/3 of the panels. They're really not necessary and with this small amount of pages it's just distracting.

 

Also, you can't be the translator AND proofreader. You can't proofread your own work.

Will take into effect, and well, technically, I could be the proofreader of my own work (I believe so.... maybe..)...

Anyway, thanks for the criticism and advise!

Savage

I'd say I was rather tame. Constructive criticism and shit.

Word of advise from another scanalator... don't put translation notes/comments on literally 2/3 of the panels. They're really not necessary and with this small amount of pages it's just distracting.
 
Also, you can't be the translator AND proofreader. You can't proofread your own work.

Word of advise from another scanalator... don't put translation notes/comments on literally 2/3 of the panels. They're really not necessary and with this small amount of pages it's just distracting.

Also, you can't be the translator AND proofreader. You can't proofread your own work.

Thank you for all both criticisms, feedbacks and supports, I have released a version where everything is a lot better, and the translation which I've this time "VERY MUCH PROOFREAD", so. If ever you feel like reading it again, go ahead

keep at it man! its tough being a translator (ik from personal experience) but all the criticism and stuff only helps make you stronger (although its not terribly fun to be criticized xD) ty for all the work you put in though

I appreciate the work that is going into the translation, but it's hard for me to read it when everything just ends up confusing me.

Thank you for all both criticisms, feedbacks and supports, I have released a version where everything is a lot better, and the translation which I've this time "VERY MUCH PROOFREAD", so. If ever you feel like reading it again, go ahead

A bit confusing there, whose panties is it? His mother's or sister's?

Thanks Hainemakoru, it might not be perfect but I believe you'll get better, but this much is more than enough for everyone mmm...

Sister is ok, but mother ... well, you need to jump first that dadwall, ok Hikaru?.

Hooray for yearly updates!

S-s-source?

Pretty late, but I think it's Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance

That last chapter translated in german... am i understanding well the ending is INCEST?!?!

anyone, pls continue a translation.

or, at least, translate last few chapters...

It's been more than a year since the update and with so few chapters left, I'm glad is finally got an update. Praise mariofan.

So few chapters = 60 Series ends at 150-something.