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Choko Beast!!

Alt Names:	CHOKO・ビースト!!
Author:	Asano Rin
Artist:	Asano Rin
Genres:	Comedy Shounen Slice of Life Supernatural
Type:	Manga (Japanese)
Status:	Ongoing
Description:	Keita and his family visited his mother hometown, and his grandfather told him not to go near the mountain because "Tengu lives there". Based on those words, Keita decided to explore the mountain. But instead Tengu, what he found there was a weird little girl. And the sweets Keita gave her became the starting point of their story...
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monkry

Mar 01 2014 04:40 AM

Hey, Kpohum is so very happy to hear your comment and feedback, but if your comment related to his error or anything but the manga itself, please do it in his blog. There you can comment as anon or anything you want, as long as you like, and he'll reply it (maybe). Well, that's it, thank you very much for your support!

foxblue

Feb 26 2014 06:18 PM

It's rough. Pretty hard to follow at points, but congrats on your first translation, Kpohum! If possible I would recommend finding a proofreader/editor with a solid background in English (i.e. Not just a native speaker, someone with experience writing). A lot of the mistakes you made were using the wrong tense and mixing up subject-verb agreement, which are, honestly, pretty basic. Not meaning to bash you guys here. I really hope my feedback will help you going forward. I would volunteer to help out, but between work and school I have neither the time not brainpower.