Astral Walker

Titan guy = Azrael clone (from BlazBlue).

Clearly Lust from FMA (Finger spears) and some combination of Gluttony (FMA) and Luffy (One Piece).

Agreed, awful writing, and blatant plagiarism.

Edit:  Chapter 16, if you want to see it.

Titan guy = Azrael clone (from BlazBlue).

The characters are beuatiful, but the action/movement aspects fo the drawings are terrible.

Plot is bad too. Dropping.

Just after seeing this, I have to ask you alyschu? What kind of slaves do you use/what kind of superpowers do you have to get this release speed!?

Am doing it all by myself unless otherwise credited. If I actually get some slaves... err people willing to clean/typeset for me, releases will probably be faster... haha... Translating a chapter of 8~15 pages takes like 10 minutes give or take. Cleaning/typesetting takes as much time as 6-10 chapters of manhua translations, even though the "cleaning" is mostly whiting out the bubbles orz.

Just after seeing this, I have to ask you alyschu? What kind of slaves do you use/what kind of superpowers do you have to get this release speed!?

It started of OK(ish), but after reading from ch 6-10 it went way downhill that i couldn't even force myself to read the rest.

Dropped.

Why is that every chinese manhua I end up checking out on Batoto has some sexy girl in the cover. Like, there's no variety ._.

Only you can answer that since you are the one checking them out. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Story goes from telling us nothing to random infodumps and then back to nothing.

The only good thing about this series is the girl body the story is confusing as hell

Been a while since i read something as bad as this.

o/

Why is that every chinese manhua I end up checking out on Batoto has some sexy girl in the cover. Like, there's no variety ._. 

I admit I could've added a comma in that summary, but I can't even edit it anyways on batoto after my first submission.

Actually you can. As can anyone and everyone, actually. The edit button isn't in an obvious place, though.

I mean them no offense when i say this. But it's prety much standard for MBC, random translators join and leave occasionally, and they pretty much work on webnovels of various genre's and standards. Also I think just about half or more of their translators (atleast at 1 point when i last looked) consisted of MTL'ers as compared to traditional translators.

 

one or more of the above factors will lead to the odd confusing kind of descriptions that will crop up.

 

edit: as for the story itself, awkward art I have come to expect from the webtoon types, and ideally 1 person shouldnt be doing everything including the Proofreading and quality checking, you just cannot objectively notice the issues.

"Descriptions" of most Chinese novels and stuff are usually written with a vague weird feel to sound cool/chuuni. I only translated the description, nothing to do with MTL. Nor am I a machine translator. What errors have you seen in this manhua? I can fix them ASAP if you're having any issues comprehending or reading what I have up. In fact, I welcome it!

The only "trouble" any Chinese translator might have in translating is thinking about (scrambling, actually) how to phrase a Chinese sentence with 3-6 commas into a single English sentence. I admit I could've added a comma in that summary, but I can't even edit it anyways on batoto after my first submission. That kind of stuff also does not exactly exist in the manhua itself as everything is fitted into their own separate speech bubbles.

ps. There was never a case where more than half the translators on MBC are machine translators, as my group was literally half the website until recently. The only currently active machine translators we have is one translator being helped from someone on my team, and joeglens, who always makes an editor check his work before posting. Turb0, who used to do Kumo daily, who will also be coming back whenever he finds time, was the only other machine translator on MBC iirc.

What's up with that description? Why is it written so awkwardly? Why is it asking so many questions? Why am I asking so many questions?!

I mean them no offense when i say this. But it's prety much standard for MBC, random translators join and leave occasionally, and they pretty much work on webnovels of various genre's and standards. Also I think just about half or more of their translators (atleast at 1 point when i last looked) consisted of MTL'ers as compared to traditional translators.

one or more of the above factors will lead to the odd confusing kind of descriptions that will crop up.

edit: as for the story itself, awkward art I have come to expect from the webtoon types, and ideally 1 person shouldnt be doing everything including the Proofreading and quality checking, you just cannot objectively notice the issues.

What's up with that description? Why is it written so awkwardly? Why is it asking so many questions? Why am I asking so many questions?!

What's up with that description? Why is it written so awkwardly? Why is it asking so many questions? Why am I asking so many questions?!

I wonder if he will ever see that key in his shit XD.

Now he has to shit to get the key back lol. 

That intro explained me NOTHING properly. Moreover, it spoils.the future episodes.

Yeah, it's pretty sjt and only covers first ten or so chapters lol.

That intro explained me NOTHING properly. Moreover, it spoils.the future episodes.

Looks interesting ~